Good animation, personal style...
You should just add a little something of a meaning :) beyond all these scenes and it's an impressive work we'd have going around here. Now it's just a -good- exercise o' style, but I accept I'd love to see a surrealistic film done by you. It would be really promising, since some of your images were absolutely outstanding, like the flesh dripping on the old man's head or the running, crying fingers.
Please keep improving... or at least stall, but please please please keep submitting!
¡Pero qué bueno es esto!
Y qué envidia me das, la verdad :)))
Lástima que al ser Newgrounds "mainly English" vas a tener una puntuación menor de la merecida... y es material de portada, creo, la verdad.
Lástima también de los problemillas de sincronización de sonido, pero seguro que lo arreglas en un futuro...
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Watched the tropical awakening, and felt it was too little... but you've redone fast and well -this the most important part-. I suggest you leave sticks and try other figures -there are some toonish thingies that are easy to make and animate but sticks and balls, and I think they would suit better the rest of the movies, which show good graphic sense. But I'm sure you'll leave sticks for more ambitious projects in little time...
Thanks for the advice. I'm working on a series called Omniscience about two nerds. It has awesome graphics and they arent stick figues. The problem I had was the walk cycles, so I'm going to come back to it when I have a lil more experience.
Impressive voice acting
Yeah, really. And the movie is indeed original.
Just improve a bit the voice acting...
...though I know that voice actors aren't that easy to find, but is the thing that I find most below the really high standard of the movie; also there was some sound a bit out of sync, but the rest was simply brilliant. Hard to improve!!
Logos are fine...
... I think you should keep them as long as you like. Yours seemed excellent to me, but might be a little complicated to understand at first glance or maybe recognize.
Just a detail: the lights reflex in the eye close shot should follow eye movement. Those reflexes are formed mostly in the pupil's edge... and there they keep.
Newgrounds is for finished work...
...the unfinished work must go to the alphas section. This includes previews, teasers, trailers, demos and so on. It seems that you didn't read the guidelines, so start by that, please.
Read the guidelines, please...
...teasers, trailers, unfinished work have to go to the alphas section, not to main NG section. The Unimind thinks it is clear enough, and don't understand why some people do want to bend the rules just for them and let the rest be fucked off.
It's not polite.
A pity those flaws
Well, you could see the tree through the train, the rail was somehow unrealistic (longer than the rest, perspective felt odd), and the turning "flat" pigeon was also a pity; just doing a single frame with the pigeon front view would have improved it considerably. The "time passes" scene was longer than it should, I feel.
But save for those thingies, this is an excellent piece of work. Goes to my favs. Pliz keep improving!
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